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by "Antoine Dubois" <dehotoni@[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Dec 28, 2004 at 11:49 AM

Can someone help for correct my subject ? Thanks


I choose a text, which called "Too thin to win : girls who put their
health 
on the line".
I choose this text for two reasons.
The first is, of course, because it's interesting and not really famous
and 
the second reason is that I am directly concerning of this problem because
I 
make cycling competition sometime at high level.
Now, I will give a summary of this text and then I will explain my
position, 
my experiences and  at last conclude.

The text is an article written by Denis Campbell ans taken from the 
newspaper The Observer dated from July 6th 2003. The subject talks about 
malnourished female athletes.
Indeed, the autor explains that a groving number of womasn athletes are 
suffering from eating disorders as anorexia nervosa and bulimia. This 
phenomenon is due to look-like a perfect physical and to improve her 
performance as for as to reach perfection.
The consequences of this problem are risking brittle bones, fertility 
problems and even early death by becoming dangerously slim.
S****ts which are first concerned are long distance running, cycling, 
swimming, gymnastics either skiing or.
In this article we can read several athletes who bear witness to this as 
Charlotte Dale a cross country champion or Daniela Hantutchova a tennis 
player.

I make cycling competition with the best. For example, more often than not
I 
make races with Sonia Huguet because she comes from Lorraine. She was in 
Athènes at the JO 2004. I either have make race with the big Jeannie Longo

in the french champion****p. I have equally make races with the team 
Nederland, Switzerland, German at the time of runstep competitions.
I think thet this illnesses live but aren't really usual. I believe as 
cyling s****twoman that a lot of s****tmans have obsession for always have
the 
least of grease. That it's true. Indeed, most of them and I control here 
weigh once of day because have a weight plummet is already one trump for 
win.
I am not certainly that cycling s****twomans look like perfect physical 
specimens.
Cycling involve a lot of concessions : sleep at raisonalbely hours, don't 
drink alcohol, don't get to discothek... and have a good alimentation. But

sometimes it can be get eating disorders which can put their health.
The problem are that most of s****tswoman haven't a medical or
psychological 
to follow-up.


I had like to conclude by stating that it would be interessant and 
im****tantto inform lover of s****ts the danger of malnutriton, consquences 
and the act of kindness from doctors, coach and psychologist when we can 
have one of them.
 




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"Antoine Dubois"  2004-12-28 11:49:04 

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