CrayzeeGuy wrote:
> His parents wanted a girl when he was born because they had
> always dreamt of calling their first daughter, Allison.
Why did you put in an extraneous, comma?
> They decided to give him a name that would go down in history
> as the worst one ever.
How do you know that they decided this?
Where is it do***ented?
Exactly whose opinion is it and what is his/her/their bias?
> He demanded a trade from the Chieft back in 97' due to
Due to?
> the fact that
Fact that?
How about "In 1997, he demanded to be traded from the Chiefs because
detractors frequently taunted him with the dyscorism "Chief".
> he was constantly being disrespected by being called "Chief". Pupunu
> made a champion****p appearance with the Chargers in Super Bowl XXIX
> with the Chargers in the 1994 season, with the Chargers
Did he make merely an "appearance", or, in your biased opinion, did he
actually play?
Did you think to mention the team for whom he was playing?
> and helped them get there by
> scoring a touchdown in the AFC title game. He rode Natrone Means'
> coattails in every aspect of life
Really? *Every* aspect? Do you have this do***ented too?
> that year including his trip to the NAACP convention.
In whose opinion was he merely riding on the coattails of another?
> Though Pupunu only scored five
He only scored five?
Do you not mean that "he scored only five"?
> career touchdowns (three regular
> season, two postseason), he performed a unique celebration after each,
> in which he mimicked chopping open the football as if it were a
> coconut and drinking the "milk" inside.
Why do you have "milk" inside quotation marks?
In your opinion is coconut milk less worthy than milk from a mammal?
> Pupunu finished his career with 102 receptions for 1,000 yards and 3
> touchdowns in 103 games.
Did he finish his career with those numbers?
If you check, you might find out that these were ac***ulated over his
entire career.
They didn't just suddenly show up when he was done.
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